Sunday, April 13, 2008

FIFTH

Every human is filled with emotions which they think cannot be understood by anyone other than themselves.But this wasnt wat Christy felt when she went on a date with david.Who wants a luxurious lunch, flowers n chocolates when all that was wanted was jus plain and uncomplicated compassion.David was the kinda guy who wanted company for his present state of mind and talking about Christy,she wanted to feel what true love was.Her history can only explain this.Though she had known David for a very long time,she didnt have the opportunity of experiencing some lonely time with him.Going out alone came up just as a topic of discussion which is now a reality.Though David had somethin cute in his mind,she had no clue wants in for her.They just caught up at a railway station on a sunny morning.With some mystery in his eyes and eargerness in hers.Wid absolutely no idea about their destination,she boards the train.After a while even after he breaks the suspence,there exists an unanswered question in her looks.Lot of waiting had to be undergone before they could settle down at the end point.With the cool air brushing against their faces and love in her heart they held their hands.The content cannot be told in words.Their entire date was only in the train,to n fro.With the seaside view from the train,they thought wont this time become a standstill...

7 comments:

Swarna Latha said...

well... as i read thro it...loads of emotions....overwhelmin joy,tears of contentment and happiness filled my mind and heart! indeed..there isn anythin more than a true companion who can give u such a compassion! THE TOPIC IS BEAUTIFUL TO THOSE WHO KNOW WAT IT IS!
three cheers!!
INSCRIPTER

The Jamist said...

Well... Seems she has enjoyed each and every micro second with David.. so wat else happened tat day.. Continue the serene story please... I would like u to go on & on ... :-)

sgokul said...

I dont know to understand the thing but can say its some thing from the depth of a soul which love making happiness to others and which is happy in loving others..oops don take it as a mokkai..lols.

sreevatsan said...

I can sense the feeling..I have a companion like that as my best fren :) so loving n so caring :)

Aishwarya said...

really good one :) hugs for it :)keep writing :)

Shri.... said...

Silence speaks more than what words do... and that i cud read from ur words.. very beautiful and romantic...

Vasu said...

dai shri.. nee innum thirundhalaya? neways kiwi, gud one. i liked the ending. whole day in the train... hmmm warm and lovely :)